RulerofChaos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emo Girl]

Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!

carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..

[Pixels 4 ever]

Creative!

Nicely done. Your flash was inventive and kept me guessing as to what would be drawn next. The sound was very appropriate as well. Good job!

[DA21: Malevolence]

lol wut

Well, the flash was lacking, in my opinion. The animation was mostly just copy pasta pictures with some tweening, and some crudely drawn pictures. There was no sound, either. I suggest you work on your animating, add some sound (music and sfx), and maybe add some more background story (I was a little confused). I'll give you a 2 for effort. Keep trying.

MrNumberTwo responds:

There is sound. You must have your speakers off or some shit.

[Mozz and Megaman!]

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...............I am at a loss of words. Honestly, I can't think of anything to say. All I saw was a picture that was buzzing around a picture of megaman and dr. light, with bizarre music. I don not understand why you are submitting this flash; please do not submit flashes like this, they will only irritate people. Please try something else.

[Star Wars LightsaberFight]

Nicely done!

I rather like this flash. The action was pretty intense, and the animation looked smooth. The only things I might suggest would be a background, and maybe a few more different sound effects, but other than that, it was great! Well done!

[Black V Pink]

well...

as far as stick figure fights go, this one seems below par. Its short, has very little animation, and very little sound. I suggest you lengthen the flash, animate it some more (try to touch up the animation too, don't just add some without trying to improve the look of it), add a background, add some music and add more sfx. Keep trying.

[Super Wario Brothers]

Well...

the flash was very short, and was good for maybe a quick laugh. It was a good idea, but it needs to be substantially lengthened. Make this longer and it will be much better.

[Killer Tofu]

hmm...

Well it was kind of funny (maybe a little weird at times) but videos are more for sites like youtube. Newgrounds is more for flashes and the like. I liked it, but since its a video I can't rate it as high as I would normally.

[DodgeBall: Sports Odyssey]

Well...

to be honest, it was very slow, and had very little animation. Also, only the same like 15 seconds of music looped, which was annoying. The idea isn't bad; continue working on this and it will be better.

[Pokemon: A Real Battle]

Aww, you killed pikachu.

But I thought it was funny. You make a good point of how unrealistic the game (and show) can be. Nicely done.
P.S. Good pokemon choice with Mewtwo. Mewtwo owns =)