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Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!

carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..

lol wut

Well, the flash was lacking, in my opinion. The animation was mostly just copy pasta pictures with some tweening, and some crudely drawn pictures. There was no sound, either. I suggest you work on your animating, add some sound (music and sfx), and maybe add some more background story (I was a little confused). I'll give you a 2 for effort. Keep trying.

MrNumberTwo responds:

There is sound. You must have your speakers off or some shit.

Hmm...

Well, it was very short...and a little random. I suggest you extend the flash, mostly. Maybe work on better animation. It wasn't TOO bad, but it was far from good.

AshleyAnimates responds:

Yep, next time i'll try work on something longer as I know it was incredibly short :) It was mainly just trying to get to grips with all the movement etc.
Thank you for the review ^^

Okay...

I suggest not using like one picture for a movie. I would post the picture like on your account or something and add a description. It doesn't make sense to make it into a flash movie unless there is an actual movie...
666 reviews is kinda funny, though, I guess.

Puerdeth responds:

Yes it is "kinda funny"

umm...

Okay, well the animation was lacking, the movie was very short, and it wasn't conveying the humor that you probably intended. I suggest that you work on your animation (seriously, that didn't look like Chuck Norris at all), extend your movie, add a lot to the storyline/plot (too random and half-fast, I think), and make it smoother so that it makes more sense. Practice your animation and keep trying. 1 star for using Chuck Norris.

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