RulerofChaos's Reviews

[Emo Girl]

Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!

carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..

[Pixels 4 ever]

Creative!

Nicely done. Your flash was inventive and kept me guessing as to what would be drawn next. The sound was very appropriate as well. Good job!

[DA21: Malevolence]

lol wut

Well, the flash was lacking, in my opinion. The animation was mostly just copy pasta pictures with some tweening, and some crudely drawn pictures. There was no sound, either. I suggest you work on your animating, add some sound (music and sfx), and maybe add some more background story (I was a little confused). I'll give you a 2 for effort. Keep trying.

MrNumberTwo responds:

There is sound. You must have your speakers off or some shit.