RulerofChaos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Emo Girl]

Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!

carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..

[Pixels 4 ever]

Creative!

Nicely done. Your flash was inventive and kept me guessing as to what would be drawn next. The sound was very appropriate as well. Good job!

[Mozz and Megaman!]

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...............I am at a loss of words. Honestly, I can't think of anything to say. All I saw was a picture that was buzzing around a picture of megaman and dr. light, with bizarre music. I don not understand why you are submitting this flash; please do not submit flashes like this, they will only irritate people. Please try something else.

[Star Wars LightsaberFight]

Nicely done!

I rather like this flash. The action was pretty intense, and the animation looked smooth. The only things I might suggest would be a background, and maybe a few more different sound effects, but other than that, it was great! Well done!

[Black V Pink]

well...

as far as stick figure fights go, this one seems below par. Its short, has very little animation, and very little sound. I suggest you lengthen the flash, animate it some more (try to touch up the animation too, don't just add some without trying to improve the look of it), add a background, add some music and add more sfx. Keep trying.

[Super Wario Brothers]

Well...

the flash was very short, and was good for maybe a quick laugh. It was a good idea, but it needs to be substantially lengthened. Make this longer and it will be much better.

[Killer Tofu]

hmm...

Well it was kind of funny (maybe a little weird at times) but videos are more for sites like youtube. Newgrounds is more for flashes and the like. I liked it, but since its a video I can't rate it as high as I would normally.

[DodgeBall: Sports Odyssey]

Well...

to be honest, it was very slow, and had very little animation. Also, only the same like 15 seconds of music looped, which was annoying. The idea isn't bad; continue working on this and it will be better.

[Pokemon: A Real Battle]

Aww, you killed pikachu.

But I thought it was funny. You make a good point of how unrealistic the game (and show) can be. Nicely done.
P.S. Good pokemon choice with Mewtwo. Mewtwo owns =)