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Not bad

Your flash has potential. It has appropriate music and I think your flash has a good idea, showing people how people with low self-esteem or depression, etc. feel on a day-to-day basis. I would only suggest a few things that you could add (they're just simple problems, though, so you've probably heard them before): a preloader, an ending, and a story (not necessarily anything super long, just a bit of storyline and maybe a little background description on your character). I'm saying this mostly because the loop startled me (I thought there was more until I realized it simply looped). Other than that, great job!

carolshki27 responds:

i am planning to put a preloader..i finished the storyline and plus ive also finished making the flash..im just waiting for my uncle to install adobe flash cs4 since i only used movie maker in making this flash..

Hmm...

Well, it was very short...and a little random. I suggest you extend the flash, mostly. Maybe work on better animation. It wasn't TOO bad, but it was far from good.

AshleyAnimates responds:

Yep, next time i'll try work on something longer as I know it was incredibly short :) It was mainly just trying to get to grips with all the movement etc.
Thank you for the review ^^

Okay...

I suggest not using like one picture for a movie. I would post the picture like on your account or something and add a description. It doesn't make sense to make it into a flash movie unless there is an actual movie...
666 reviews is kinda funny, though, I guess.

Puerdeth responds:

Yes it is "kinda funny"

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